Wednesday, November 30, 2011

Blog 17 (Research Question, Methods, and Relevant Research)

1.      The focus of my research project will be how identity on clothing (particularly baseball and football teams) characterizes the kind of behavior we show while wearing these clothes.
2.      I will be using four methods in my research project: autobiography, ethnography, interview, and discourse analysis.  I will use autobiography to introduce how, when, and why I became a fan of certain baseball and football teams (New York Mets and New York Giants respectively).  I will also talk about how I came to strongly dislike certain teams and some of their fans because of the rivalry that exists between them and my favorite teams.  I would use ethnography by attending a Mets and Philadelphia Phillies (Mets division and most hated rivals) game in Philadelphia to observe how classless and immature their fans truly are when they wear team apparel. (no offense if anyone in this class likes Philadelphia sports teams)  I plan on using interview as a method and I would talk to my mom’s best friend who happens to be a die-hard Giants fan and would ask certain questions like
·         How long have you been a Giants fan?
·         How often will you wear Giants apparel?
·         How many games per season do you attend?
·         Do you act differently when wearing Giants clothing?
·         What do you do when you see someone else wearing Giants clothing?
·         How do you respond when you see someone wearing Dallas Cowboys or Philadelphia Eagles clothing?  (Cowboys and Eagles= division and hated rivals of Giants) 
I would finally use discourse analysis to find out if she had a certain tone in her voice and what might have led to that tone.
3.      I would use many different outside sources to prove some of these points.  One article in particular from GQ Magazine briefly explains how and why Philadelphia Eagles and Phillies are the number 2 and 1 worst fans in America. (http://www.gq.com/sports/lists/201104/worst-sports-fans-in-america#slide=14)
There is also an article from USA Today that talks about how sports fan violence has gotten way out of control.  (http://www.usatoday.com/sports/columnist/lopresti/2011-08-22-stadium-violence-shooting-raiders-49ers-game_n.htm)
I might also use a book entitled Sports Fan Violence in North America by Jerry Middleton Lewis. 

Sunday, November 13, 2011

Blog 16 (Possible Research Project Idea)

One possible idea I have for the next essay is to do something related to people wearing their favorite sports team jersey or other team clothing.  For example, I am a die-hard Mets fan and will proudly wear my favorite player (David Wright) jersey or a Mets t-shirt on opening day or the day after a victory.  I will be looking into how wearing sport team clothing will affect people’s interactions with other people.  This project will probably include two types of research methods, interview and discourse analysis.
I would possibly interview my mom’s best friend, who happens to be a huge New York Giants fan.  Some of the questions I might ask her would include something like the following:
·         How long have you been a New York Giants fan?
·         How often will you wear something that says Giants on it?
·         How do you react when you see someone wearing a Giants shirt or how have other people reacted to you?
·         If you see someone wearing a Dallas Cowboys or Philadelphia Eagles (two of Giants most hated rivals) shirt, do you automatically assume that you’re not going to like the person based on their sports team?
I would also use the method of discourse analysis to see how people wearing different sports team clothing respond to someone wearing either the same sports team clothing or a different one.  I could do this research pretty much anywhere from school, the mall, food store, or a restaurant.     

Wednesday, November 9, 2011

How I Plan on Revising My Discourse Analysis Essay (Blog 17)

I plan on revising my discourse analysis essay in many different ways.  One of the first things I will need to do is not include Dr. Chandler’s name in the essay since names are supposed to be anonymous.  I will need to replace Dr. Chandler with the letter S for Sally.  I didn’t realize this when I was writing, so I’ll have to fix that.  I will also need to keep in mind when editing this essay is that it I am writing this as a researcher, rather than a student.  I might have to use better language and vocabulary if I want to make my writing sound more like a researcher instead of a student.  Another thing I may need to do is either take out my introduction paragraph all together or make it sound more like a researcher.  Even though I gave some good evidence from the transcript, I could use longer quotes and more specific evidence to prove the point I am making, particularly when I mention the use of A using many pronouns as a result of possible nervousness.          

Saturday, November 5, 2011

Blog 14 (What I did well, where I need to improve, and feedback I want for Discourse Analysis essay)

I have to be honest and say that I struggled quite a bit when writing this essay.  Eventually after many hours of hard work, I was finally able to put something together.  I feel pretty confident that I did a good job on completing this assignment and did many things well.  I thought that I had a very good focus and backed it up with good evidence from the transcript.  I proofread my essay before submitting it, so I am pretty sure that my grammar and sentence structure is very good.  I also had over 1200 words, which was required for this Discourse Analysis essay.  Like any essay or writing assignment, there are certainly some things that I need to improve on this essay.
            One of the things that I may need to improve on this essay is making sure not to be too repetitive with certain words.  I have a tendency to repeat myself in essays at times, so if I did that in this one, I will have to improve on that.  I might want to improve this essay by using a little more evidence to back up some of my points. 
            Receiving feedback after doing an assignment is extremely helpful in my opinion.  It gives the writer an opportunity to use ideas that he or she may not have thought of the first time.  A couple of the things I would like my reviewers to comment on is whether or not they think that I have a good focus and if so, do I  back it up with good examples.  When writing this essay, I wasn’t too sure if my focus was a good one, so I would appreciate hearing what my classmates think.     

Wednesday, November 2, 2011

Discourse Analysis Assignment Rough Draft

Katie Woodworth
November 2, 2011
Chat Room Experience Transcript


Prior to taking this class, I had never heard of the term discourse analysis and had no idea what it even meant.  After reading the definitions in the textbook Research Methods for English Studies, it seemed to make sense that everyone of us uses discourse every day of our lives. We also use discourse analysis everyday when we respond to a question or remark that someone makes during a conversation.  It had never occurred to me that these every day conversations I have with my friends, family, coworkers, professors, etc. could be analyzed as a research method in English studies.  I also never thought to look at the specific tone that a person uses while they are talking to someone else and it can change based on the discourse and the relationships.  I learned that there are multiple ways to look at a conversation and there is no right or wrong way to do so.
For this discourse analysis assignment, I will be using the transcript that deals with one of Dr. Chandler’s former students, known as A, and her experiences in chat room sessions.  This transcript shows specific experiences and personal stories that A had discussed during the chat room sessions.  There are many different parts of the transcript that can be closely examined and for this assignment I will be specifically focusing on for this assignment is what led the tone of A’s voice going from scary in the first excerpt to funny in the second excerpt.  I will also be focusing on the impact that an interviewer can have in changing the tone of the person being interviewed.
After reading the first part of the transcript, I could immediately get the impression that A appeared to have a scared tone in her voice.  There was a specific instance when she tells Sally that she thought she talked to a pedophile and she gave the man her number.  He had called her and she hung up on him because she was so terrified.  This is evident in the transcript when A tells Sally, “I was so scared.”  Later in the transcript, when the man called A, she had told him what she was wearing and quickly says goodbye.  A even said “Oh my gosh, he’s going to find out where I live, my mom’s going to kill me.”  This is another example of the scared tone used by A in the transcript.    
When I first read this transcript, I did not think to look at what Sally may have said to A that could have led to A using a scary tone.  However, after looking at the transcript a few more times, it seemed to me that when Sally leads A into talking about her opinion on computers when she was younger, this could possibly have led A into remembering the experience she had in fifth grade when she thought she was talking to a pedophile.  I also realized at this point that Sally mentions something about “the call” and A immediately can recall the time that she was in a chat room talking to someone.  It was very important that Sally asked the questions to A in this specific way so that Sally could get A to talk about this subject the way that she intended to.  This totally set the tone on how the whole interviewing process turned out.
By the second excerpt, A’s tone had shifted from frightened to a more relaxed and even funny tone.  I feel that the first question that Sally asked A in the second excerpt made her feel less anxious.  Sally had asked A what she and her friends normally do while they go on the computer.  A talked about how the computer came with paint and that she and her friends would make pictures and use photoshop and mentions that they “had a lot of fun.”  This comment really shows the change of tone in A’s voice.  After hearing this answer, Sally started laughing, which may have led to A remembering additional, less scary, chat room experiences. 
I felt that the question that really led to A’s transitioning to a funny tone was, “Do you have a particular story about one adventure with technology”?  A responds with a story about a time when she and a friend were in a chat room and decided to go on some guy’s profile and he asked them for a picture of themselves.  As it turned out, they were talking to their pastor’s son, which seemed awkward for them at that time, but now A laughs at it.   
Although I did not hear or see the actual interview between Sally and A, just by reading the transcript I could really get the sense of how A felt when she remembered the phone call she had received in fifth grade.  A even admitted that she was really scared at one point during this phone call and I do not blame her at all; I would have felt the same way if something like that happened to me.  When A talks about hearing a voice that was not a kid, I could almost picture this scene taking place in my head.
It is possible that A may have been nervous during this interview.  This could have led to the scared tone in the first excerpt.  The main reason I feel that A may have been nervous is because it seemed to me that she had very lengthy answers to Sally’s very short questions.  A also did much of the talking and it took her more than one time to get the story out to Sally.  A uses a lot of pronouns too, which could have been another result of her nervousness.  In the second excerpt, it seemed that A was much more relaxed than in the first one.   The fact that A’s answers were much shorter proved this possible explanation to be true.  This could possibly be the result of A becoming less nervous and more relaxed during the progression of the interview.  Unlike the first transcript when Sally did much of the talking, A and Sally had each done a fair and consistent amount of talking during the second excerpt of the transcript.  The only parts of the second excerpt that A’s responses appear to be longer are when she told a personal story about additional chat room experiences.      
Rereading a transcript multiple times can certainly make you think of and realize different ideas that you may not have thought of the first time.  The first thing that I had noticed after reading this transcript was the many uses of pronouns by A.  After discussing this transcript in class and reading it a few more times after class, I realized that A’s tone had changed from a scary and nervous one to funny and relaxed. Although I was hesitant at first on whether or not I could analyze a transcript, I feel somewhat more confident about analyzing not only a transcript of a previous interview and even a group of people having a conversation.  After learning more about discourse analysis, I now know that you may need to have a more open mind about looking for specific thoughts and ideas on a particular subject.