I plan on revising my discourse analysis essay in many different ways. One of the first things I will need to do is not include Dr. Chandler’s name in the essay since names are supposed to be anonymous. I will need to replace Dr. Chandler with the letter S for Sally. I didn’t realize this when I was writing, so I’ll have to fix that. I will also need to keep in mind when editing this essay is that it I am writing this as a researcher, rather than a student. I might have to use better language and vocabulary if I want to make my writing sound more like a researcher instead of a student. Another thing I may need to do is either take out my introduction paragraph all together or make it sound more like a researcher. Even though I gave some good evidence from the transcript, I could use longer quotes and more specific evidence to prove the point I am making, particularly when I mention the use of A using many pronouns as a result of possible nervousness.
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